Friday, July 27, 2012

Solution to Wednesday's Song Exercise

Hi everyone! Today's post will be short, just to give you the solution to Wednesday's song exercise. Remember that you had to find the errors in the song below. I'll include the video with the lyrics again, just for reference, and after that I'll include the solution at the end of the post:


Find 11 Mistakes in These Lyrics:

INCUBUS – LOVE HURTS


Tonight we drinks to youth
and holding fast too truth
don't want to loose what I had as a boy
My heart still has a beat
but love is now a feet
as common as a cold day in LA
Sometimes at nite alone I wonder
Is there a spell that I am under
Keeping me from seeing the real thing


Love hurts, but sometimes is a good hurt
And it feel like I'm alive
Love sings, when it transcends the bad things
have a heart and try me
'Cause without love I won't survive


I'm fettered and abused
Stand naked and accused
should I surfaced this one man submarine
I only want the truth
So tonight we drinked two youth
I'll never lose what I had as a boy
Sometimes at night alone I wonder
Is there a spell that I am under
Keeping me from seen the real thing
(Repeat chorus)

Solution
(changes are underlined and in bold)

INCUBUS – LOVE HURTS

Tonight we drinks to youth
(drinks--> drink)
and holding fast too truth
(too--> to)
don't want to loose what I had as a boy
(loose--> lose)
My heart still has a beat
but love is now a feet
(feet--> feat)
as common as a cold day in LA
Sometimes at nite alone I wonder
(nite--> night)
Is there a spell that I am under
Keeping me from seeing the real thing

Love hurts, but sometimes is a good hurt
(is--> it's)
And it feel like I'm alive
(feel--> feels)
Love sings, when it transcends the bad things
have a heart and try me
'Cause without love I won't survive

I'm fettered and abused
Stand naked and accused
should I surfaced this one man submarine
(surfaced--> surface)
I only want the truth
So tonight we drinked two youth
(drinked-->drink) (two--> to)
I'll never lose what I had as a boy
Sometimes at night alone I wonder
Is there a spell that I am under
Keeping me from seen the real thing
(seen--> seeing)
(Repeat chorus)


So, were you able to find all the errors and understand why they were errors? If you have any questions or comments, I'd be happy to hear from you!

Have a great weekend, and see you again on Monday! 

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